Subject: Re: Crashing the party; finalizing plans

I was out of town the last two days, so it might be tough for me to get the turn written up today, but I will try.

If not today, then definitely Monday.

Subject: Crashing the party; final prep

Ok guys, I need one last thing.

I need to know EXACTLY where everyone is during the actions leading up to starting the attack. I am sending an incomplete map of the tower, please note where you will be on this map while the prep is happening, ie the haste spell and summoning spell.

I have put labels on the map for each of you, please just move your label to where you would be, and send it back to me. The stuff you see on the inside of the tower is was have been seen from the outside. Most of the inside is a mystery to you at this point.

Subject: Re: Crashing the party; final prep

Clearly, the long years of heroin use have begun to take their toll. "The stuff you see on the inside of the tower is was have been seen from the outside." Holy crap, what does that even mean? Try:

The stuff you see on the inside of the tower on the map is what has already been seen from outside.